Before
I get into my responses to the reading, I want to briefly say that, for the
second week in a row, I left the Edwards reading for last and, after reading
it, had to go back and revise my initial readings of the other texts,
particularly Johnson's preface. The first time I read it, I very much sensed a
privileging of the literary and even, perhaps, the white. In addition to the
assigned readings, at Imani's suggestion, I also read Hughes's “The Negro
Artist and the Racial Mountain,” in which Hughes describes a troubling tendency
among his peers, writing, “[A] young Negro poet said to me once, 'I want to be
a poet—not a Negro poet,' meaning, I believe,
'I want to write like a white poet' […] this is the mountain standing in the
way of any true Negro art in America—this urge within the race toward
whiteness.”
When
Johnson says things like “A people may become great through many means, but
there is only one measure by which its greatness is recognized and acknowledged
[…] the amount and standard of the literature and art they have produced,” and
repeatedly disparages the accomplishments of the poets he's including in his
collection, I certainly see him privileging the literary and the white/Western,
even as he exalts the musical quality of dialect writing. Edwards's generous
and careful reading, though, picked up on some thing which I certainly did not,
and which have great bearing on Hughes's poetry.
I
unfortunately don't have the space in this blog entry to rehash Edwards's
argument in detail. I will, however, draw out the threads I found most
compelling, such as his discussions of performance and swing(ing)/sway. Edwards
draws this concept from Johnson's preface to Book of American Negro
Spirituals, in which Johnson describes the swaying bodies of the
congregation keeping time, but the particulars of this time are important. He
is trying to transcribe these sermons with some difficulty, writing, “The
'swing' of the spirituals is an altogether subtle and elusive thing. It is
subtle and elusive because it is in perfect union with the religious ecstasy
that manifests itself in the swaying bodies of the whole congregation.” As Edwards explains, though, “[A] true
transcription is possible for Johnson; it is one in which the transcriptional
form somehow 'catches' what it cannot represent notationally” (589).
Hughes's
poems attempt to catch something of the blues in a similar way. Edwards
talks about a double-apostrophe in the blues poetry of Hughes. Hughes isn't
transcribing an original performance like Johnson; instead he's writing a text
in which “sight is forced to infer an absent sound,” in which there is no
original performance to transcribe, per se. Absence, Edwards points out,
is an essential feature of the blues, in which an apostrophe calling out to an
absent lover is also a prominent formal feature. So to put this in my own
words, the absence of the performance actually performs absence. Since we
recognize a musical quality that isn't there but feels like it should be,
that the poem is invoking through its formal elements, we are doubly-aware of
the sense of loss that the poem conveys.
That
said, I've found a couple of readings of Hughes's poems that I thought we
should consider. In a way, I felt like Edwards was saying that the ideal
performance of Hughes's poems was in the text itself, because it contained that
double-apostrophe, that mixtery between the event—the performance—and the fixed
text. However, I'd like to talk together in class about how this performance of
“Weary Blues”--which doesn't come from Fine Clothes to the Jew, but
which I chose because there's a video of Hughes performing it that I found
super compelling, particularly because he reads the words “This is what I'm
gonna sing,” in spite of the music. I also included a performance of “Mulatto,”
which comes from “From the Georgia Roads” in Fine Clothes because I
thought it embodied call-and-response in a way in which perhaps Edwards was
suggesting the “Blues” poems in Fine Clothes didn't.
Hughes
reads “Weary Blues” to Jazz accompaniment:
“Mulatto,”
with not musical accompaniment:
Listening,
rather than reading of “Mulatto,” do we experience the kind of apostrophe
Edwards is talking about? Do we feel the absence of music? And if not—for me
the answer is no—is it because the apostrophe is absent in the text, or is it a
failure as a reader? Is there anything significantly different between this
reading and the way Hughes reads “Weary Blues” above? Or is there a difference
in the way this poem invokes call and response in its text that links it with
that aural tradition rather than a musical blues tradition?
I
should mention this was one of the more troubling poems for me to read, more
troubling still to hear. In the preface to Fine Clothes, Hughes wrote
“The mood of the Blues is almost always despondency, but when they are
sung, people laugh,” and while this poem did not come from the “blues”
collection of the poems, I didn't find myself laughing when I read it or when I
heard this reading of it. In fact, I didn't experience the laughter much at all
in this collection. I'm curious to hear if I'm alone in this, or if I should
take Hughes's statement literally or not.